单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;语言不流畅;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
Tom made rules for himself.He get up at 6 o'clock every day.He have to leave home at 6:15 and go to school. He can't eat any food after leave home.He can't listen to music in the class and can't watch the TV on the school nights.He have to back home after Am 12:00 and Pm 9:20.