初一英语作文模拟题:我的理想

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My Dream Have you got a dream ?My dream is be an English teacher. I think English teacher is a very interesting job. English teacher can teach children how to study English.English in our life is very inportant.When we in the other contry ,we can talk with each other in English. I love English,I wang to be an English teacher.