单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;注意句式在文中的变化,加强一些从句的使用,文章会更棒;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构不严谨;连词使用偏少。
Hi I am Tom I have so much rules such as : 1. Get up at 6:00. 2. Go to school at 6:15. 3. Don’t eat outside 4. Don’t listen to music on school days 5. Don’t watch TV on school nights 6. Be back home by 12:00 in the morning and by 9:20 in the evening