采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者在句法层面做的很棒;文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;请注意分段。
I have a good friend whose name is Arvin,I like him very much,who is very tall and very kind.We always play games in my home or his house sometime,the games are interesting and we enjoy ourselves day by day.I think we would be friendly to each forever no matter where we go and where we are in the coming future.