雅思TASK2大作文模拟题:审查制度 Censorship

文章词汇表达丰富，学术词汇积累做的也很棒；丰富从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章结构严谨，有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。

When it comes to the altitude towards the limitation of watching TV programmes and movies,someone hold the view that it is permissible for the children to get in touch with the programmes comprising a lot of violence.From the perspective of myself,I am standing on the opposite position.Before rendering the commitants generated by the vicious impression after watching these movies,I will analyze and penetrate into the specific factors. First of all,the TV programmes play a parament role in the daily life,which contributes to the changing of the social value and moral standard.Hence,the violent programmes is bound to have an impact on the core culture,not to mention the children.Moreover,form the perspective of the children,they are more easily obsessed in the stimulative virtual violence and inability to curb their appetite. Indisputedly,many of the juvenile delinquency were the consequence of the poor education and the growth soul,apparently,when the high-tech modern technology penetrated into public and individuals,it is fail to escape the attraction by the programmes and monies comprising violence. Besides,owing to the immature characteristic,the youth is vulnerable to the violent movies,consequently,they turn it to be a reality when they are in a state of negative emotion and it is considerably inevitable to form an insane and dangerous moral.