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Tom's rules Tom must get up at 6:00 and got to school at 6:15. He couldn't eat outside and at school, he has some things he couldn't do,for example,he mustn't listen to music on the school days and watch TV on school nights. He must go back home by 12:00 in the morning and by 9:20 in the evening.