初一英语作文模拟题:我的理想

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My Draem What do you want to do when you grow up.scientist,piayer or actor?But I want to be a guitar player.Bcause I piay guitar very well when I was very young, and Ilove guitar very much. I hope that one day I stood on the gorgeous stage, playing the songs composed by myself. I hope that when my two-year-old, when you canfulfill my dream .This is a difficult dream, but I will work harder. I believe that this dream will come trueone day. I believeI can do it!