初一英语作文模拟题:我的理想

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；可适当增加从句和长句的使用；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰；连词使用偏少。

My Dream What do you intend to do when you grow up.Want to be a scientist,a doctor or a actor? I want to be a guitar player. Because I play the guitar very well when I was very young, and I love guitar very much. I hope that one day I stood on the stage, playing the songs composed by myself. I hope that when my two-year-old, when you can fulfill my dream.This is difficult, but I will work harder. I believe that this dream will come one day. I believe I can do it!