七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

句式变化不明显，另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例；文中用词稍显贫乏，同时请注意单词拼写的检查；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构不严谨；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。

Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday , then went to the park by bike . He had a good time in the park . In the noon , he ate the lounch in the McDonald's with his parents. In the afternoon,from 4 till 6 ,he played the baskitball with his xlassmates at the school . After dinner ,Sam went for a walk with his father, father bought a CD give him. How a beautiful day it was!