七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；语言不流畅；请注意分段；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Sam got up at 6:00 yesterday morning, and then he rode to the park and had fun there. At noon, he had lunch in McDonald’s with his parents. At the afternoon, Sam played basketball with his classmates at school from 4 to 6. After dinner, Sam gone for a walk with his father, and his father bought him a classical CD. What a funny day Sam had.