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现在你的家乡是什么季节？天气怎么样？人们在这样的天气里都干什么？根据提示写一篇介绍你们家乡天气的短文。
winter, windy and cold, wear coats and scarves, in restaurants, in the park， have a good time
采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；句式灵活多变，再加强从句的使用会更棒；单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。
It is winter here; the weather is cold and cloudy. People are wearing coats and scarves, but everyone has a good time, friends and family are eating and drinking in the restaurant, and the young people are singing and dancing in the park, the boy are playing soccer, they are all have fun.
