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My name is Lucy King, I am from UK and I can speak English. I want a pen pal in china. I think china is a beautiful country and I love it very much. I am 13 years old and my birthday is December. I have a little dog name Coco, I really like little pets. I like playing sport and listening music on the weekend. I often go to the movies theatre with my friends. Please write and tell me about yourself.