七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，但单词拼写做的很棒；从句使用不足，建议增加长句和复杂句的使用；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Sam got up at 6:00 yesterday.Then he went to the park.He was happy in the park.He went to the McDonald’s to have lunch with his parents.In the afternoon,Sam played basketball at school with his friends from 4:00pm till 6:00pm.After dinner, Sam and his father go for a walk, his father bought him a classical music CD. How interesting that day Sam flies ah!