七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Sam got up at 6:00 yesterday.Then he went to the park.In the park,he was happy.He went to the McDonald’s to have lunch with his parents.In the afternoon,Sam played basketball at school with his friends from 4:00pm till 6:00pm.After dinner, Sam and his father go for a walk, his father bought him a classical music CD. How interested that day!