七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；没有能够有效地使用连接词和过渡词；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Sam gets up at six o'clock yesterday. And then he goes to the park by bike, he was happy to play in the park. At noon he with parents in McDonald 's lunch. Afternoon Sam and his classmates play basketball at school, from four pm until six pm . After dinner, Sam and his father go for a walk, his father bought him a classical music CD. What a happy day Sam had!