七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，请增加词汇量的积累；语言不流畅；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。

Sam got up at six o’clock yesterday morning. After that, he rode his bike to the park. He had great fun playing in the park. At noon, he had lunch in McDonald’s with his parents. In the afternoon, Sam played basketball from four to six with his classmates. It was relaxing. After dinner, Sam went for a walk with his father. His father bought a classical CD for him. He was very happy because he enjoys music very much. What a happy day Sam had! Yesterday morning,Sam got up at 6:00.After that,he rode his bike to the park.He has great fun played in the park.at noon,he with his parents ate lunch in the McDonald's.In the afternoon,San with his friends played basktball in the school.After dinner,Sam with his father went fora walk,father bay a CD had. What a happy day Sam had!