七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；文中词汇表达不够丰富，同时请仔细检查词汇的拼写；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

Sam got up at yeastday,then drive to park.He have fun in park.On today,he and his parents go to McDonald's to lunch.On aftermoon,Sam and his friends go to school to play the basketball .Since 4 till 6 o'clock in the afternoon. After dinner,Sam and father go for a walk,father bought a CD to he.What a day was Sam has interesting.