高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文中用词稍显贫乏，在词汇拼写也要再接再厉；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。

My favorite sport is playing football. I falled in love playing football by chance. One day, I picked up a football on my way to go home. After that, I usually play football with my friends. From then on, I love playing football absolutely. In order to improve my skills in playing football, I often train and have tha match. I find that is a great way to exercise my ability on playing football. Because of love playing football, my favorite football star is Beckham,who is so amazing. What's more,I want to be a professional football player.The dream absorbs me deeply.