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sam gets up at 6.00 and then go bike to the park.he have a good time in the park.on the afternoon sam with his parents have lunch with his parents.on the afternoon they play basketball from 4.00.after dinner ,sam and his father go for a walk .his father sell a classical cd .what a fibe day today