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Sam got up at 6.00 and then go bike to the park and he have a great fun in the park.at noon he have lunch with his parents.at at afteoon he play basketball with his friends from 4.00 to 6.00.after supper,sam and his father go for a walk .his father give him a classical cd.what a fun day sam has