小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a friend .His name is Laodi,he is my deep lover,I love him very much.He always make me cry and make me smile,he is 10 years old then me for our age,but I don't care more.We have a lot of fun in our heart,we respected to each other.We have a big dream that have a big house and a cute bby in the furture,wish is true.