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Tom's rules Tom usually gets up at six o'clock in the monring,then he goes to school at fifteen after six. After arriving at school,he haves breakfast there because he doesn't eat outside.He not only doesn't listen to music on school days,but also not watch TV on school nights.Usually he is back home by 12 in the monring and by twenty after nine in the evening.This is Tom's rules.