单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;行为稍欠流畅,过渡词用的还可以。
Tom's rules Tom usually gets up at six o'clock in the morning,then he goes to school at fifteen after six. After arriving school,he have breakfast there because he doesn't eat outside. He not only doesn't listen to music on school days,but also not watch TV on school nights.Usually he is back home by 12 in the morning and by twenty after nine in the evening. This is Tom's rules.