初一英语作文模拟题:保护眼睛

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How to ptotect out eyes Eyes are very import for us.Without eyes,we can't see anything,so the world is sad for us. Then how to protect our eyes? First of all,we can't watch something continuely over an hour.After watching something an hour,we should take a rest,at least ten minutes Secondly,we can't see the strong light which can harm our eyes thirdly,we can't watch something in dark situation and laying in bed The lastly,we should do exercise for eyes and use medicine for eyes.