2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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you know ,success always needs your work hard .I can tell you that you should keep your wilipower for your successful.The sthdents also like this ,if they don't work hard although will became a fail people .Strong willpower is also a important things to the success.We must firm our willpower never give i up and never fear to face that . I hope you can have a magnificent moment in your life. Leet's encourage to face it ,you can do that ,I believe you can do it .