2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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In recent years ,a new way to appeared for people's shopping that shopping online.I think it a fashional way to our's life. Shooping online is also more convenient,on the one hand when you want to buy somthings that you need not outdoor ,you just need log in your comuter and network choise what is your favorate staff , finally, you can click on the purchese of the bottom for fnished your order. Following you don's worry about anything ,just wait for the expresses on your door, that so easy ,right? Everything has two side ,on the anther hand as well as a few problem in this way,like a bank trick or the quality is so bad of you bought . In my views,when you pay money on online,you must be be careful the window on suddenly skiped and do not to be a mister for some cheaper staff.I wish you have a good day.