七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，但单词拼写做的很棒；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

sam waken up at 6 A.M last morning,he ride his bike to the park and was very happy.He had lunch with his parents in McDonald's.On the afternoon,from one p.m to six p.m,Sam played basketball with his classmates. After dinner,Sam and his father gone for a walk, and his father brought a classic CD to him. What a interesting day Sam had !