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Playing football is my favourite hobby.By chance,it made me like football.In the home's way l picked up a football.After that l played football with my friends together,therefore l love playing football deeply. In my free time and so on l often practise with my friends and enter for the match. My favourite football star is Beckham from England,so my the largest dream is who will become a professional football player.