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字数：300 满分：100分
能够简单运用一些从句；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误。
save money nowaday,the people's life standred have a high level,but in my opinon is we also should to save money for our health.Because our health is one of the important.however,many people don't think they are need to save money,they are rich. I always save a large of money that my mothod is just buy what you wanted things. I dont's feel like waste my time and money.i will on a diet to reduce my cost.I like sports,such as jogging,tennis etc. In a word,we should cut down our spending,we need smart buying and smart cost,because if you waste your money than means you wasted our resources for a world.Therefore,starting our new plan for our world,you should save the universal.
