作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。
how to keep in a good mood Everything has two sides.people had to face a serious of difficult,for example,happy ,sad,cry,smile and disappoint.We just need courage to deal them. You should have a plan for your life,when you encouraged trouble,you must be happy,never cry for that.You should take more exercises,likewise tennis or fitness.We should let our spirit in a clean,that will give us in a good mood anymore. I don't like going out,what should I do?I‘t's too easy,you just need follow your heart,but be so blue,imarge your tommow is wanderful! After all,we also have a optimed ,the sun of tommow is a new one.