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2003年专业四级英语作文真题:保持好心情

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:19浏览次数:3985
要求:
题目 The importance of keeping a good mood.
说明 People in modern society live under a lot of pressure, from education, career, or family. So it is important for them to keep a good mood under whatever circumstances. Write on ANSWER SHEET ONE a composition of about 150 words on the following topic: The importance of keeping a good mood.
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分57.5分
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作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

how to keep in a good mood Everything has two sides.people had to face a serious of difficult,for example,happy ,sad,cry,smile and disappoint.We just need courage to deal them. You should have a plan for your life,when you encouraged trouble,you must be happy,never cry for that.You should take more exercises,likewise tennis or fitness.We should let our spirit in a clean,that will give us in a good mood anymore. I don't like going out,what should I do?I‘t's too easy,you just need follow your heart,but be so blue,imarge your tommow is wanderful! After all,we also have a optimed ,the sun of tommow is a new one.

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