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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8974[网页划词已开启]
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分55.0分
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采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;句式变化多样;文章词汇表达多样性不足,不过词汇拼写要再接再厉;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

don't judge a person by their appearance nowadays,people always proud and arrgent,they are like to judge a person by their appearance.I don't think that a good ways,every have their own characters.For exmaple,a guy looks like so ugly, but his spirit is clean and goodness,on opposite for a beauty person that looks nety and elegent,when he or she speaking,instently,emerged their bad side that ou will found their's dressses doesn't suit their's appearance. I like judge a person form the characters and behivors.I reckon that don's judge a peoson by their appearance best.Everryone have their own temper,if you don't respected,you can get the same treat,be a good person,you must learn to how to respect others.

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