文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Andy is the handsomest man I have ever seen. He has blue eyes that likes deep sea, when he laughs and always reveals a row of white teeth. And he is muscular and courteous. The most important is he is erudite. You will open your mind when you take his classes, most of the topics are about kinds of history and economy. He has a terrific sense of humour. Sometimes he will be amusing at the classes such as curls his upper or copies someone's example. Although he attacks most of students, some students complain to his manager, for his classes is very serious and even scared. He was very disappointed that he have decided to change another center. He is the most prominent teacher in my heart.