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Ruth is Australian who loves traveling. It was the first time to take her class but no less interesting. The class's was talking about countries. If you have a choice to live aboard, which countries do you prefer, and another was to persuade someone to work in Africa. It not only broaden our horizons, but to practice how to have a conversion with people. And she also told us that she traveled lots of countries such as The United kingdom and America. She is erudite and affable person who patiently explain us.