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Rob is frank and he is from Australia. He has a square face and high-bridged nose. I was hard listening while he was talking, because he spoke nether slowly not clearly. The class mainly talked about if to suppose something then answered by the person who sat besides you. To make me amusing thing was when I asked some questions to him. He directly pulled out his underwear outside. That might was different from education of China.