初一英语作文模拟题:我的理想

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My dream I have many friends all have dream,there are become a teacher，a doctor and a scientist.However,my dream is become a boss.I think a boss have relaxed and have much money.At my side,I am admire some boss ,they have many friends,munch money,a big and beautiful house，a luxury car.I konw I need to learn more knowledge ang skills.