单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
Tom had a many rules. Tom had get up at 6:00. He must go to school at 6:15. He don't eat outside food.He can't listen to music on school days and he can't watch TV on school nights.he are back home by 12:00 in the morning and by 9:20 in the evening .