2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦93:让座

可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；作者词汇积累很好，不过单词拼写方面要继续努力；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用；请注意分段。

a oldman carrying his younger grandson get to the bus.I saw the oldman is carry a heavy bag and a violin.I imdireterly stand and give the seat to the olsman,but his grandson on it,the oldman only next to the pole.I am imanging like this,the boy louldly and asking to drink water.Just a bit of water in the bottle,the boy throw out the empty bollte on the bus.I hate is bad manner,we should keep our bus to clean. In my opinion,the youngerest should to respect the older and take care of them that have a concept to protect our enviranment.