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I come frome the Uk and I can say Enaglish, I wanted to Pen pal in the china,because my feel china is very beautiful. I want understand the china. I'm 13 year old. I find a china girl. better have a intetering habbies, I like sports ,music and movies . I very hope studs chinese with her .