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人教新目标七年级英语下册 Unit 12单元 测试卷

发布时间:2013-06-14 18:28浏览次数:4860
要求:
阅读下列规章,然后写一篇短文来介绍Tom’s rules。
Tom’s rules
1. Get up at 6:00.
2. Go to school at 6:15.
3. Don’t eat outside.
4. Don’t listen to music on school days.
5. Don’t watch TV on school nights.
6. Be back home by 12:00 in the morning and by 9:20 in the evening.
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作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累学术词汇;文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;上下文衔接手法不熟练,没有能够有效的使用衔接词;请注意分段。

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Tom is a student at the KHON KEAN middle school.Every day Tom gets up at 6:00 and after has his breakfast he goes to school at 6:15 from his home.He don't eat anything outside because his parents don't primmest him to eat the other thing.He can't listen to music on school days because his class is very more so he doesn't have time to hear music,but he doesn't feel sad.Then he can't watch TV on school nights,he must to finish his homework in sevenry hours.At time for lunch,Tom goes back home at 12:00 in the morning.He study class over at 9:20 and goes back home to have a sleep.This is Tom's one day study,do you feel he study hard?

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