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Hi! My name is LucyKing. My first name is lucy.My last name is King. I'm 13 yers old. I'm language is English.I'm hobbies are sports,music,movies.I like eat apples.I does't like eat bananas.I good at palying ping-pong.I not good at palying baskteball.My moter's name is CideSdvg. My father's name is LucyBoor. Father and mother's occupation is a teacher.
