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hello,my name is Lucy king i came from American i'm a middle school student. i learned some about Chinese history from my school,l want know more about China history,people culture anything i would like find a Chinese girl.as some as my age,like sports music like movies i hope the girl like sports music and movies, i hope she'is a happy smart girl ,i want write a letter to her every week we're together talk about Chinese history people and porpulation, i want learn some Chinese also i teaching some English to her ,i hope in the furture i can travel to China i hope she become my directioner. i wish this day coming,could you met i