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文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；从句使用不熟练；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。
Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday morning. Then he went to the park by bike. He enjoyed himself in the park. At noon, he had lunch with his parents in McDonald's. In the afternoon, Sam played basketball with his classmates at school, when it was from four o'clock to six o'clock. After the dinner, Sam went for a walk with his father. His father bought a classical CD for him. What a funny day Sam had passed.
