运用了一些简单从句,但不是很熟练;作者词汇量偏小,文章用词太过单一;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
my net fiend is lovely gril whosename is nina .we often chat with on the interner.she it dood at sing dancing .she is clever gril.she like reading books,olaying computer games.she is so nice to me .she often help me with my homeqork and some other things in life .she is funny and she often tell me funny jokes