初一英语作文模拟题:我最喜爱的电影

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My favorite movies Hello,boys and girls!My name is Jenny.I‘m 14-year-old.My birthday is on October 31st.I‘m a movie fan.I like action movie and science movie. My favorite actor is Jackie Chan.He is a great action actor. He has many movies . For example.The Around the World is 80 Days,Rob-B-hood and Rush Hour.These movies are very exciting. I really like Rob-B-hood very much,because they are exciting. I like action movie movies very much.