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Sam wake up at 6 yestarday. Then he went to the park. He have fun in the park . At noon he and his parents have lunch together in McDonald's. In the afternoon he play basketball with his classmates in cshool from 4 to 6 p.m. After dinner, sam and his father go for a walk, his father bought a classic CD for him. What a fun day.