初一英语作文模拟题:保护眼睛

句式变化较丰富，若注意文中个别句子错误会更棒；请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性，但文中有较多拼写错误；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

with the internet having becoming an indispensable parts of modern p,s life, p always surf the internet day and night ,espscially among young people.this has lead to a heated argument as to whether is it wise to regular to access to the internet.in my opinin, we could surg the internet but we should have a rest when work on the internet for a long tot time. frist of all , it is hamful our body and it is difficult to recover u eyesights again.it sounds ridiculous when one in order that surg the internet step back their eyesights. p should be couraged to doing eye exercise after a long time spent on it