单词拼写做的不错,文中词汇表达贫乏;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段;可以适当增加副词的使用。
Our monitor is a girl.She has black hair,a nice face,two big eyes and a little mouth.She is kind to us.And she is a good student.Many teachers all like her.She studies hard.She aways helps us with our study.We all like her.She is our good fiend.And she is teachers' good helper.She is good at that sing and dance.