七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

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I am Sam.I get up at six o'clock yesterday morning.Then I rode my bike go to the park.I had fun in the park.I had lunch in McDonald’s with my parents at noon.Then I played basketball that I had happy with my classmates in our school.I had this sport from four o'cock P.M. to six o'clock P.M..this sport is good for our health.After dinner,my father and I went for a walk.My father bought a Classical music CD.What a interesting day!