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文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但学术词汇稍显不足；有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Ideal is the heart of each of us, it can be a beacon for us Pointed out the direction of the. However, the ideal is in need of a goal, but Is it needs to realize our own. Everything has its own ideal, the flowers The ideal is to open a colorful flowers, birds build nests of ideal is strong. while My ideal is to be thought eye-catching musician. Whenever I see many famous singer on television in own stage heartily With beautiful song singing, the audiences to infection, I would aspire to become one A musician, let my song throughout the five continents, oceans, warm every four people Soul. Music, my ideal goal. It with its own special charm In all, it has its unique charm and its melody is so beautiful, it's voice Sound is so charming. Become more is not ideal of musicians, because I am shaken Believe it will not abandon my pursuit of it carefully, it will let me bathed in light of the ideal . Music is very fond of, more important is it always encourage me, let I have the courage. Every day, I always have music company, it became my heels Good friends. Failure and setbacks, I never fear, because be The musicians always reminds me ideal: now I still so far from ideal, The road ahead is still very rough, refueled! With conviction to overcome everything! When I'm tired, as long as the music of his ears rang, I had to forget Is tired. Ideal is the stone, knock out a spark, The ideal way is illuminated, discuss the road, Daniel Want to extinguish the fire, lighting lamp, Ideal is the road, you go to dawn. As long as I have The firm faith, courage and effort, I believe I will step by step The road towards the musician, reach the ideal state!
