高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

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piaying football is my favorite, i fell in love with football by chance, one day , on my way home , i found a football , i was so cruiosity on this little round ball that began to play it with my freinds, from then on , football became a part of my life. i ofen play football witn my classmate , we tain ourselfs , sometimes compete on football gams in order to improve our skills. among all football star, i admire Beckham the most , my greatest dream is becoming a professional football player